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Echinese

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1 THE GRAVE OF LOVE 爱 之 墓

Thomas Love peacock 民韬 译

I dug,beneath the cypress shade, 柏树荫下掘墓坑,
what well might seem an elfin`s grave; 埋葬昔日君所赠.
And every pledge in earth I laid, 墓周玫瑰花已枯,
that erst thy falls affection gave. 墓上石碑苔又生.

i pressed them down the sod beneath; 玫瑰短命似君爱,
I placed one mossey stone above; 柏树长存如我情.
And twined the rose`s fading wreath 只叹二者不长聚,
Around the sepulchre of love. 难解遗恨伴余生.

Fraill as thy love, the flowers were dead, 1995年9月26日
ere yet the evening sun was set;
but years shall see the cypress apread,
Immutable as my regret.

2 WHEN WE SHALL BE DUST 当 我 们 已 成 了 骨 骸

Muna Lee 民韬 译

When we Shall be dust in the churchyard-- 当我们成了墓园里的骨赅,
ln twenty years--infiftyyears-- 经历了一代或两代.
Who will remember yOu Kissed me once, 谁还记得你曾吻过我?
W ho will be grived for OUr tears? 谁还会为我们的眼泪而悲哀?

The lOcust tree will have grown taller, 树苗长成了参天的刺槐,
The old walks will be coverd with grass. 昔日的小路也被野草掩埋.
And past our quiet graves go straying 一位青年搂着情人的腰肢,
A yOuth with his arm round his lass. 在我们墓边谈情说爱.

And the bee that shall suck your grave flowers-- 蜜蜂亲吻着你墓上的花儿--
Anemone,stock,columbine, 紫罗兰,银莲花和耧斗菜.
May pause in his swift homing journey 也许是为了品尝我墓上的花蜜,
To taste of the honey from mine. 该回窝时却仍旧在这里徘徊.

［ 本帖最后由 tiyz 于 2006-03-01 18:55:26 编辑 ］

foxsql

翻译的很好

将中文的韵味翻译出来了

比原诗强百倍

tiyz

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原文由 foxsql 发表于 2006-3-1 17:56:08 :

翻译的很好

将中文的韵味翻译出来了

比原诗强百倍

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翻译得很好

你自己也错字连篇啊。

Echinese

铁头可当选为本月幽默讽刺大师！

FLemon

...很羡慕啊，我连英文都读不太懂